Welcome back bloggers,
This week I have been learning how to improve my writing.
I am proud of this work because I tried very hard to spell things right.
The part I found challenging was spelling because I need to spell paddock and other hard words.
Bog you soon.
Kia ora Emily,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your free write with us, it's fabulous. Next time you could think of more interesting ways to start your sentences so that they don't all start the same way (I, and, We). What would you name your horse if you had one?
I look forward to seeing more of your awesome work.
Mrs Taylor :)
Thank you yes I can think of interesting ways to start my sentence next time. Do you like to write your own stores? can't wait for you to reply to me next time.
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