I am a Year 4 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teachers are Mr Brown and Ms Lange. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, as it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wednesday, 18 August 2021
Emily`s storyboard that
Today I am going to tell you about my Storyboard that. It is about mean and nice comments. It is a nice girl and a mean horrible girl and the mean girl says that was bad add more info. Then the nice girl started to cry the mean girl went to a cafe and started to think if she should say sorry. She got there the nice girl was crying and the mean girl said sorry and asked if she wanted to go to the cafe? The nice girl said yes and they became best friends. They went to the cafe the nice girl said a joke then the mean girl who was nice now said that was so funny and then nice girl said I know right.
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Hi Emily,
ReplyDeleteYou have made a great job of your Storyboard that cartoon. I am glad you explained it a bit more in your blog post.
I think we have to be careful when we make these cool DLOs that the message we are trying to show doesn't get 'lost'. It was a good idea to add a banner with your message in the last picture.
It might be a good idea to read your work aloud so you can hear where the commas need to go.
Did you enjoy using the Storyboard that app?
Keep up the awesome mahi
Ms Lange